Friday, November 15, 2013

Aaargh Mate

I would prefer to be a pirate than ninja. I would be a pirate because they go on a ton of adventures.They go to danderous places and are very fearless. They get to go on a ship and sail all the seas. I think that it would be fun to have a sea breeze brush against my face, to smell the fresh salt, to feel the bumps of the waves and watch the sunrise, and set. Also, I would love to see the millions of stars light up the sky. I would prefer to be a pirate because of all the funny words they say. Like, "Shiver me timbers", and "aaaargggghhhh".Plus pirate (girls) wear the cutest outfits.Mine would be purple with a hat and eye patch.I would have my own ship.I would name it the " Kayla Cherie", with 15 workers aboard. I would be a pirate because they live life carelessly.And I think that would be nice for a change , even if only for a day.

1 comment:

  1. Kayla,
    Great reasoning behind your decision!
    Be sure to use appropriate diction and syntax. You could take you two sentences: "I would prefer to be a pirate than ninja. I would be a pirate because they go on a ton of adventures" and make them one: "I would prefer to be a pirate than ninja because they go on a ton of adventures."

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